As we didn't allow enough time we had to change our opening sequence. We were unable to access the locations we aimed to use, the graveyard and the basement.
We ended up using the college site, we used the toilets for where the two girls were arguing and for Mel's hand and newspaper scenes we used a billboard outside a classroom.
The whole storyline changed:
It starts off showing mels walking to her wall - where she has been stalking Abi
The camera focuses and shows all of mels work she has been doing
It flashes back to the girls entering the toilets
They begin to argue and shows theres conflict between the two of them
The camera shows mel is watching and she knows that the girls are arguing
Throughout all the flashbacks - mel is shown to be writing a letter too Abi, saying she knows
We left it as a cliffhanger so it builds tension up and makes the audience what to continue to watch
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