Pros -
Good use of sound - diegetic and non diegetic
Good graphics - the animation at the begining
Credits are good and fit in well
Good use of fade outs
Good variety of shot types
Editing in general fits well with sound
The title at the end is well presented
The flash transitions flow well
Cons -
Fairly hard to follow
One clip is out of focus
Costumes could be better
Own feedback - aims-
Music wasn't suitable in some areas - redo and make some more music
First title maybe keep on screen for longer
Need to blur out Abbies face in all the scenes not just on one of them
Shots in the bathroom - try and make them zoom in and out - move about more!!
Shots upon shots - fading into each other
Mels face is too comical - cut it a lot shorter
Maybe do voice over for abis bit
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